Tobacco is a kind of drug, people have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tobacco

is easily accessible to the masses in the markets. Many

a

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health specialist is of the view that states should make it against law to consume

this

fatal drug.

This

essay totally agrees with

this

initiative as it not only will stimulate

the

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smokers

to quit but

also

save

life

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of several innocent passive

smokers

. To commence with, the primary reason why making smoking illegal makes sense is that it helps those addicted to cigars quit their habit. A survey conducted by

Narcotics

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bureau

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of India among the rehabilitation centres of Mumbai revealed that 67% of

smokers

admitted that social pressure from their mates influence them to take

this

drug.

Therefore

,a law prohibiting smoking would force

the

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smokers

to

smoke

alone ,which would not give

smokers

the intense pleasure of

this

activity,leading them to motivate to quit. Not far behind is the life of passive

smokers

which is at risk owing to the indirect

inhalement

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enhancement

of

smoke

while standing among the active

smokers

in public places. A

ban

on using

such

narcotics would limit

this

type of exposure.

For example

,after Ireland decided to

ban

smoking in all indoor workplaces,a significant decline was seen in the number of cases of lung and mouth cancer among the restaurant and pub workers,leading other countries to adopt the same culture. The

last

prominent reason why

this

ban

on

tobacco

,out of all the drugs is warranted is the exponential rise in

number

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of

tobacco

users. Nations are not encountering the problems of inclined cases of lung cancer for no reason. It is definitely because of the bad habits that have been developed among the individuals to

smoke

in order to relieve their stress out of their hectic schedules.

However

, what they fail to realise is that they are playing with their own lives

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the name of

smoke

as a

stress- buster

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. In conclusion,

this

essay believes that imposing a

ban

on

tobacco

assists to reduce the cases of lung cancer patients and

reduce

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the number of

smokers

.