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Some people say that public sports facilities improve people health problems. Others argue that this development has insignificant effects on public health. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #sports #facilities #health #development #effects
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group
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 of individuals claim that general sports
facilites
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facilities
 aids in resolving
heath
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health
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 related issues.
On the contrary
, some people assume that
this
 approach has no considerable benefits
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 the human body. In my perspective, I believe it has huge significance in improving
health
 which would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, recreational centres
such
 as gyms, swimming pools are plays a vital role
innimproving
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in improving
 well being of human . Owing to that fact, it
assist
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 in building endurance , strength and power that will ultimately increase the fitness level of a person.
In addition
, these places are accessible to every person
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 the community. So , one can easily use according to their
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schedules
 .All these factors in combination
promotes
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 a
stragety
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strategy
 to build a healthy nation.
On the other hand
, these days people are extremely busy in handling
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 and
completiting
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completing
 targets and meeting deadlines. So they hardly get
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sometime
some time
 for themselves to utilise the benefits of these places.
In addition
 , there are many other sectors of the society which are needed to be improved to provide good
health
 services to citizens
such
 as hospitals. In my opinion , it is not possible
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and
afforable
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affordable
 for everyone to get all
equipments
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equipment
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 for
excercising
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exercising
 at home as they are very expensive . Recreational centres
offfers
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offers
 them at
a reasonable prices
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 and even free of cost. So it gives chance to improve
health
 despite
of
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their financial condition. To conclude,
although
 a number of other sectors
also
 require good funding
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there are
lot
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 of incredible benefits of general games centres on
health
 which should not be ignored.
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