In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Nowadays,
people
are committing more and more violent crimes in developing nations. Why do these convicts attempt Use synonyms
such
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henious
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heinous
offence
? Is it because of Fix the agreement mistake
offences
zero
tolerance level or the class system? It turns out, that both these reasons cause violent felonies and some measures can be taken to control them.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
people
today have decreased patience Use synonyms
level
, which means that they become angry or frustrated quickly and do not tolerate things that are unfavourable. Fix the agreement mistake
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For example
, a man who comes homeLinking Words
,
sees that his wife is cheating on him with another man and instantly shoots his wife and her lover out of sheer anger. The culprit does not get the time to cool down; Remove the comma
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, he attempts Linking Words
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homicide. Linking Words
Secondly
, Linking Words
the
society is divided into various classes because of income inequality. The rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. Correct article usage
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Such
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underpriviliged
members are unable to meet basic needs for their family and are forced to commit violations like theft, Correct your spelling
underprivileged
burglery
or murder. In short, the convict is found guilty because of the circumstances around him or her.
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burglary
However
, Linking Words
such
violence should Linking Words
to
be taken into account so that we can reduce Change the verb form
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these anti-social behaviour
. To decrease the frustration level, Change the determiner
this anti-social behaviour
people
must learn to control their anger and start to let go Use synonyms
their
pain. Change preposition
of their
For instance
, if we consider the man in the above example, after watching the scene, he could have thrown his wife and her lover out of his house and could have given her a divorce. In Linking Words
this
way, he does not have to commit the crime of passion. The best way to control one's anger is by performing yoga and meditation. Linking Words
In addition
, there should be no difference in wealth among Linking Words
people
so Use synonyms
that
concept of rich and poor is eradicated. Everyone has the right to earn and should be given equal wages as Correct determiner usage
the
this
may reduce robbery and murder Linking Words
assualts
.
To conclude, the environment and surroundings play a major role in criminology. Correct your spelling
assaults
People
should try to remain calm and Use synonyms
the
society should only develop the concept of Correct article usage
apply
single-class
background system. Add an article
a single-class
This
will not only decrease the crime rate but Linking Words
also
make a country free of crimes.Linking Words
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