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Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services.

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Nowadays most information is transmitted through the
internet
 . The strong dependency has been created as personal, political and economic news are shared through it .Many masses believe that it should be accessed to everyone without any charge whereas others think that all services on it should be paid
.
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 In earlier times information was passed through newspapers , telephone or virtually but the
internet
 has taken its place . Most activities of the
human
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humans
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 today rely on the
internet
for
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,for
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 example, Working from home in bad weather conditions which is only possible if each and every person has
access
 to technology. WWE
also
 offers many platforms through which people feel connected to each other while sitting far from each other without any geographical barriers
for
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,for
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 example,
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
,
instagrams
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 .People are able to share photos, news etc. with their loved ones whenever they want to,
therefore
 feeling proximity and closeness.
On the other hand
 , there are many advantages of the
internet
 but its multifold disadvantages cannot be denied.
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 of the
internet
 has enormously increased due to which they are not giving time to each other. They prefer to interact with each other through social apps rather than having conversations in person.People are spending 20-30 hours on
the
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digital devices .
As a result
, it is conclusively clear that
internet
 advancements have diminished and decreased our
real life
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 interactions. In my
opinion
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,opinion
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 cyberspace encourages easy life but if used wisely.So, the government should not provide easy
access
 to the
internet
 whereas these financials should be used for other problems of the country like poverty and starvation. In conclusion, higher authorities should give
access
 to the
internet
 for free where it is needed.
For example
, in rural
areas
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 there should be
access
 to the
internet
 only on one computer for free.
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