Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services.

Nowadays most information is transmitted through the

internet

. The strong dependency has been created as personal, political and economic news are shared through it .Many masses believe that it should be accessed to everyone without any charge whereas others think that all services on it should be paid

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In earlier times information was passed through newspapers , telephone or virtually but the

internet

has taken its place . Most activities of the

human

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today rely on the

internet

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example, Working from home in bad weather conditions which is only possible if each and every person has

access

to technology. WWE

also

offers many platforms through which people feel connected to each other while sitting far from each other without any geographical barriers

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example,

whatsapp

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WhatsApp

Whatsapp

,

instagrams

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.People are able to share photos, news etc. with their loved ones whenever they want to,

therefore

feeling proximity and closeness.

On the other hand

, there are many advantages of the

internet

but its multifold disadvantages cannot be denied.

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of the

internet

has enormously increased due to which they are not giving time to each other. They prefer to interact with each other through social apps rather than having conversations in person.People are spending 20-30 hours on

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digital devices .

As a result

, it is conclusively clear that

internet

advancements have diminished and decreased our

real life

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interactions. In my

opinion

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cyberspace encourages easy life but if used wisely.So, the government should not provide easy

access

to the

internet

whereas these financials should be used for other problems of the country like poverty and starvation. In conclusion, higher authorities should give

access

to the

internet

for free where it is needed.

For example

, in rural

areas

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there should be

access

to the

internet

only on one computer for free.