Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The advent of technology has changed the life of human beings.
People
are seen to live more than their expected age. Certainly ,
this
will arise a few issues not only
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the individuals but
also
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society.
However
, there are effective
solutions
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problems.
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problems and
solutions
for the given context.
To begin
with, the case of
people
living more than expected leads to two major concerns.
Firstly
, it will increase the reforms budget of the Government because old
people
require more facilities for a comfortable living. The outcome will be
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tax on all
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is increased and there is no decrease in
deaths
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rate
then
the proportion of active employees will lessen.
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, in Switzerland because of the percentage of the olds
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youngsters , authorities are not able to benefit as much as they spend on providing facilities Hopefully, there are two practical
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problems. In order to decrease the Government's pressure, authorities have to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70,
people
will need to work longer.
This
means that they would pay more in taxes, reducing the cost of government pensions.
Additionally
, if governments encourage families for taking care of their elders
then
the number of
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will decrease.
For instance
, if citizens get adequate remunerations from governments , both individuals and governments will benefit from it as individuals will have enough money to look after elders. To conclude, if we commence
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this
distressing issue , the percentage of employees will increase as elders and adults will work at the same time and
also
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will create a responsibility of families.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • quality of life
  • vaccines
  • antibiotics
  • global connectivity
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable future
  • climate change
  • online education
  • knowledgeable and empowered societies
  • privacy issues
  • mental health impacts
  • economic and societal inequalities
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural shifts
  • traditional social structures
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