Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The advent of technology has changed the life of human beings.

People

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are seen to live more than their expected age. Certainly ,

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will arise a few issues not only

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the individuals but

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to

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the

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society.

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, there are effective

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that can help in struggling

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problems.

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essay would discuss

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problems and

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for the given context.

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with, the case of

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living more than expected leads to two major concerns.

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, it will increase the reforms budget of the Government because old

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require more facilities for a comfortable living. The outcome will be

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tax on all

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usable

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birthrate

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is increased and there is no decrease in

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the deaths

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rate

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the proportion of active employees will lessen.

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, in Switzerland because of the percentage of the olds

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youngsters , authorities are not able to benefit as much as they spend on providing facilities Hopefully, there are two practical

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for the

above mentioned

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problems. In order to decrease the Government's pressure, authorities have to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70,

people

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will need to work longer.

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means that they would pay more in taxes, reducing the cost of government pensions.

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, if governments encourage families for taking care of their elders

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the number of

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home

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will decrease.

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, if citizens get adequate remunerations from governments , both individuals and governments will benefit from it as individuals will have enough money to look after elders. To conclude, if we commence

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distressing issue , the percentage of employees will increase as elders and adults will work at the same time and

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another

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solutions

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will create a responsibility of families.