Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The advent of technology has changed the life of human beings.
People
are seen to live more than their expected age. Certainly ,this
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However
, there are effective solutions
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solutions
for the given context.
To begin
with, the case of people
living more than expected leads to two major concerns. Firstly
, it will increase the reforms budget of the Government because old people
require more facilities for a comfortable living. The outcome will be increased
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Secondly
, if Correct article usage
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the deaths
then
the proportion of active employees will lessen. For example
, in Switzerland because of the percentage of the olds overweigh
youngsters , authorities are not able to benefit as much as they spend on providing facilities
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solutions
for the above mentioned
problems. In order to decrease the Government's pressure, authorities have to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70, Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
people
will need to work longer. This
means that they would pay more in taxes, reducing the cost of government pensions. Additionally
, if governments encourage families for taking care of their elders then
the number of nursing
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home
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homes
For instance
, if citizens get adequate remunerations from governments , both individuals and governments will benefit from it as individuals will have enough money to look after elders.
To conclude, if we commence to tackle
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distressing issue , the percentage of employees will increase as elders and adults will work at the same time and also
another
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other solutions
solutions
will create a responsibility of families.Submitted by parvanaasgarova1 on
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