Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The only constant factor in life is change. Few
people
believe that working in the same
organization
for a long time is beneficial
in contrast
to
people
who believe that change should be consistent and it is productive to work in different organizations. Changing or not changing
organization
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is a subjective idea.
However
, in my opinion, working on different platforms is always a cherry on the cake for a better
career
. We shall reason
this
out with the few examples below. On
one
hand,
people
working longer for the same firm can be beneficial to their
career
growth in later years but the fear of taking
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risk
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to step out of their comfort zone can
also
be
one
of the key factors.
People
working in government sectors are generally considered to have
a long enduring careers
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in the same field since their time of start.
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can be considered for
people
working in private sectors for
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amount of time period.
However
,
this
path can
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them to
a top management positions
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a top management position
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which they always desired for.
For instance
, Sundar Pichai is now the CEO of
google
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after having
an
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exponential growth in the same company for
long
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,
same
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is the case with Paras Agarwal the current CEO of
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.
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their excellent contribution to the company these
people
have excelled
the
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world .
However
, the percentages of
such
successful
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stories are very low nearly around 1% . The masses are settled with the idea of not stepping out of their shell. Due to which they reach a stagnant position in their life.
On the other hand
, networking, knowledge, and social factors affect the goals of an individual. In
this
fast technological era, where knowledge is available on all platforms the networking and social areas hit the points for an enriching
career
which could be achieved if an individual works for different organizations. It not only helps in their pathway but
also
comes with monetary benefits. The exposure to take risks and getting accustomed to new ideas is where real success lies
in
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.
For instance
, APJ Abdul Kalam who used to sell newspapers
initially
to contribute to family finances and tried his luck in becoming a fighter pilot and later joined DRDO. Looking at
this
pathway unless we try and step out of the zone we won't be able to achieve the place which is meant for us.
Similarly
, Narayana Murthy who used to work in Patni Computer systems for five years after his
first
failed venture led him to be
one
of the successful business
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of
an
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IT field. In conclusion, risks shape
the
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career
perspectives and teach life lessons. To achieve a leadership level venturing out is
one
of the most important factors.
However
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in
this
population growth staying in
one
organization
might affect the desire for the goals and could be more readily achievable if an individual shapes his or her own
career
rather than waiting for an
organization
to do so.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Longevity
  • Corporate ladder
  • Adaptability
  • Comfort zone
  • Professional network
  • Diverse skill set
  • Industry exposure
  • Innovation
  • Resilience
  • Seniority
  • Job market
  • Career trajectory
  • Company culture
  • Professional growth
  • Job security
  • Promotion prospects
  • Cross-functional experience
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