Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The only constant factor in life is change. Few
people
believe that working in the same organization
for a long time is beneficial in contrast
to people
who believe that change should be consistent and it is productive to work in different organizations. Changing or not changing organization
is a subjective idea. Correct article usage
an organization
However
, in my opinion, working on different platforms is always a cherry on the cake for a better career
. We shall reason this
out with the few examples below.
On one
hand, people
working longer for the same firm can be beneficial to their career
growth in later years but the fear of taking Add an article
the risk
a risk
risk
to step out of their comfort zone can Fix the agreement mistake
risks
also
be one
of the key factors. People
working in government sectors are generally considered to have a long enduring careers
in the same field since their time of start. Correct the article-noun agreement
a long enduring career
long enduring careers
Same
can be considered for Correct article usage
The same
people
working in private sectors for good
amount of time period. Add an article
a good
However
, this
path can led
them to Change the verb form
lead
a top management positions
which they always desired for. Correct the article-noun agreement
a top management position
top management positions
For instance
, Sundar Pichai is now the CEO of google
after having Change the capitalization
Google
an
exponential growth in the same company for Correct article usage
apply
long
, Correct article usage
a long
same
is the case with Paras Agarwal the current CEO of Correct article usage
the same
twitter
. Change the capitalization
Twitter
Giving
their excellent contribution to the company these Wrong verb form
Given
people
have excelled the
world .Change preposition
in the
However
, the percentages of such
successful
stories are very low nearly around 1% . The masses are settled with the idea of not stepping out of their shell. Due to which they reach a stagnant position in their life.
Replace the word
success
On the other hand
, networking, knowledge, and social factors affect the goals of an individual. In this
fast technological era, where knowledge is available on all platforms the networking and social areas hit the points for an enriching career
which could be achieved if an individual works for different organizations. It not only helps in their pathway but also
comes with monetary benefits. The exposure to take risks and getting accustomed to new ideas is where real success lies in
. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, APJ Abdul Kalam who used to sell newspapers initially
to contribute to family finances and tried his luck in becoming a fighter pilot and later joined DRDO. Looking at this
pathway unless we try and step out of the zone we won't be able to achieve the place which is meant for us. Similarly
, Narayana Murthy who used to work in Patni Computer systems for five years after his first
failed venture led him to be one
of the successful business tycoon
of Change to a plural noun
tycoons
an
IT field.
In conclusion, risks shape Correct article usage
the
the
Correct article usage
apply
career
perspectives and teach life lessons. To achieve a leadership level venturing out is one
of the most important factors. However
in Add a comma
,However
this
population growth staying in one
organization
might affect the desire for the goals and could be more readily achievable if an individual shapes his or her own career
rather than waiting for an organization
to do so.Submitted by vanditaverma.v on
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