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Studying alone or in a group which one do you prefer and why?

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I prefer to
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 in groups. In my opinion,
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 has more advantages than individual learning.
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 in a
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, people can learn more because they share a different understanding of the subject.
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, in a
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 application, association members are encouraged to inquiry
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 subject more carefully and focus so that they can share
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 data.
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, you will find the opportunity of teamwork and
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 will increase the experience in future for people.
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, learn more skills from each other and another advantage of
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 is that it motivates you to
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 more. To read long texts and content, you can divide the work and have each person read each section and at the end people explain the content to each other,
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 saving reading time.
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 disadvantages of self-learning include non-self-discipline, no face-to-face interaction, lack of flexibility, lack of input from trainers, slow evolution and etc. In the end, it can be concluded that both
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 methods individually or in groups have advantages and disadvantages that depend on the personality of persons, age, and purpose of
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, type of
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 subject, amount and volume of
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 and so on.
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, my choice is a
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