Doveloping countries require international organizations help some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better discuss both views and give your own option.
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whether
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organizations'
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economical
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or practical aid
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viewpoint
view point
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money
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countries
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an economical
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problems
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most
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a loan
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country
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the loan
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Developing counteries
got more Correct your spelling
countries
time
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.
On the other hand
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and counsel is better reather
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rather
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war
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wartime
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aid
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countries
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a long
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. Like, developed countries
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of
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when they faced some type of problems.
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developing
countries
by money
but merits of practicle
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practical
practice
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