In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative situation!?

It differs in various countries that buying a

home

is very vital

instead

of renting one.I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of

this

situation and why

this

might be the case.

Firstly

,in these

countries

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the cost of rent might increase gradually on a yearly basis.

Therefore

,if they did not buy a house,they would pay an extra fee for renting every year.To indicate,since everything becomes more expensive in these economic circumstances,the price of rent

also

should be risen by the owner.

Also

,difficulties for changing

home

such

as carrying furniture is kind of other problem which they might be encountered.As the owner not only might increase the price

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but

also

the contract could be not accepted for

next

year.So,they should find another

home

to rent and furniture

isdamaged

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is damaged

damaged

during the carriage.

Secondly

,there is a multitude of positive and negative situations about

this

approach.

This

could become very crucial for a family and if they can not buy a

home

,it might lead to worse conditions for them.

For example

,women and children put pressure on men for buying a

home

and he does not

afford

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.

This

might due to divorce in

such

families.

By contrast

,

this

aspect can force people to try harder in order to achieve their goals.Absolutely they do their best to buy it. To conclude,they should not punish each other ,if they do not succeed.

Thus

,they ought to encourage each other to work harder and earn more money.