Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.

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While It is considered by some that the environmental issues can not be solved by the governmental
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unless individuals are not playing their part,others think that all the environmental challenges are
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unsurmountable
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and individual persons can not make
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impact on environmental
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protections
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.In my opinion,
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even though
individuals can contribute
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environmental protection activities ,the main efforts ought to come from the responsible bodies. On the one hand,
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until
people make serious
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,environmental problems will not be curbed,according to some.Each individual is responsible for making the earth polluted and inturns many catastrophic environmental issues
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as global warming.
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,if the people are not making efforts by reducing their carbon footprints and other
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distracting
activities ,the problems will not be solved permanently.
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,a person who travels a lot in a car
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emits
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amount of carbon dioxide
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the atmosphere can reduce
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gas emission by limiting the number of travels and
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by using public transportation.
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individual
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are very significant in the area of environmental protection.
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governmental
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are more crucial in environmental protection,according to some.Authorities can analyse and
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identify
the causes
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behind
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environmental
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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