Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the present age, only some human
being
devote Fix the agreement mistake
beings
time
to hobbies
. In this
essay, I will highlight the causes why people think like this
and the effect this
has on individuals and communities in general.
To begin
with, specialty
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speciality
play
an important role in peoples life. There are several factors that show only a few families spend their Change the verb form
plays
time
on sport
. Add an article
the sport
First
and foremost, most people are busy in their professional soul as they don't think their social activity also
play a crucial role in their relationships. Moreover
, juveniles are most focused on their studies which not only help them to achieve their dreams but also
makes them less interested in their art. For example
, my cousin is a state basketball player, in order to get admission to IIT Mumbai he lost his interest in art and more concerned about fulfilling his dreams.
However
, spending less time
on specialty
has a detrimental effect on societies and Change the spelling
speciality
person
in general. Fix the agreement mistake
people
In addition
, more professional people are getting depressed and are unhappy with their life as a result
their relationships are getting worsen day by day. Moreover
, juveniles are losing interest in their studies as they are not able to keep themselves motivated and energised. For instance
, in a recent survey of The Times Of India in 2019, nearly 70% of students are less motivated and losing their interest in studies as they are less interested in hobbies
nowadays.
In conclusion, hobbies
play a vital role in human life.Thus
, individuals should take some time
for their hobbies
as not only it will help them to be motivated but also
helps them in building their relationships among communities.Submitted by vfxabhii on
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