Some people think that criminal behaviour has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many
people
believe that criminal behaviour is in blood and others think that situations make people
commit Add an article
a crime
the crime
crime
. Both views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Some Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
people
judge others by their family background because they have that kind of mentality and also
believe that if parents
have criminal records then
their children should be the same as their parents
. For example
, if parents
or relatives are involved in any criminal history then
their children will follow the same in the future.
However
, it is believed by others that situations and living environment causes criminal behaviour in people
because people
learn what they observe by their birth. For instance
, if children born
and brought up in Add a missing verb
are born
criminal
environment and Correct article usage
a criminal
parents
then
they learn by observing things. Moreover
, many people
are forced to commit Add an article
a crime
the crime
crime
by their seniors in many organisations. Because in many firms or organisations junior employees have to follow their Fix the agreement mistake
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seniors
orders without asking anything. Change to a genitive case
senior's
seniors'
Such
as, in government departments
junior employees are forced to take Add a comma
,departments
Add an article
a bribe
the bribe
bribe
or provide confidential documents or tender to Fix the agreement mistake
bribes
people
who have any senior employee's reference.
In the conclusion, criminal behaviour takes part in people
's life if their family background are
involved in that. Change the verb form
is
However
, circumstances also
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affect
effect
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affect
the
most Correct article usage
apply
to
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apply
people
which lead them to commit any crime.Submitted by Misha on
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