Some people think that criminal behaviour has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many
people
believe that criminal behaviour is in blood and others think that situations make
people
commit
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. Both views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. Some
people
judge others by their family background because they have that kind of mentality and
also
believe that if
parents
have criminal records
then
their children should be the same as their
parents
.
For example
, if
parents
or relatives are involved in any criminal history
then
their children will follow the same in the future.
However
, it is believed by others that situations and living environment causes criminal behaviour in
people
because
people
learn what they observe by their birth.
For instance
, if children
born
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and brought up in
criminal
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environment and
parents
then
they learn by observing things.
Moreover
, many
people
are forced to commit
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a crime
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crime
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by their seniors in many organisations. Because in many firms or organisations junior employees have to follow their
seniors
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orders without asking anything.
Such
as, in government
departments
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junior employees are forced to take
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a bribe
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bribe
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or provide confidential documents or tender to
people
who have any senior employee's reference. In the conclusion, criminal behaviour takes part in
people
's life if their family background
are
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involved in that.
However
, circumstances
also
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effect
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the
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most
to
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people
which lead them to commit any crime.
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