You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am Sejal Patel, the main endeavour of writing
this
letter is that I would like to express my dissatisfaction about working in
this
organisation. It has been two years since I am working as a part-time employee with you in the evening and doing my Masters Degree in software programming in the morning. The reason for doing
this
job is not only to help with my financial problem, but it can
also
help to develop skills in my field.
However
, during the working period, there are many difficulties with the computer systems.
First
of all, it is not fully equipped with hardware and
Secondly
, the software in it is not updated enough.
Consequently
, if the company provides the latest machine with updated software version to their worker, it will merely help for the company reputation and progress. The company can
also
achieve good output from the workers by doing designing programming hardware. So in that ,way we can save our plethora of time and in ,return we can produce some fascinating work. I hope you can understand my above-mentioned problem and solution. I would be glad if you could pass my suggestion to the higher management team and ,
hopefully
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they will take some corrective and optimistic action as soon as possible. I would look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Sejal Patel
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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