A museum near you is looking for volunteers. write a letter to apply for the voluntary work

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Dear sir/madam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to inform you that, I am interested to be a part of the voluntary member in your museum. My name is June, I am a Malaysian Chinese, I can speak three different languages

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as Malay, English and Chinese. I have been working in the Mildura charity centre for more than two years and my main duty in the centre was preparing documents, planning and

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for all visitors.

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, I am very confident that I can handle the position that you are offering. I would like to come to your museum to have a chat with you, and I

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want to show you some photos and videos that were recorded by my previous boss. Please let me know when is the best time to contact you as I know you are very busy with the new project now. Could you please call me via 0402043289, or you can send me an email to arrange a convenient time to catch us. My email address, [email protected] I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely June

junechan822Sun Jan 02 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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A museum near you is looking for volunteers. write a letter to apply for the voluntary work

The Greeting

Robots and AI are being developed to replce humans in workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

"Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

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People in the current generations are not fit and active. What are the problems. What can be done to encourage people to participate in sports activities.