You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in

request

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the request

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of a new student identification

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. Unfortunately, it had been missing

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Tuesday,

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, it will be very helpful if you can arrange

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a new one.

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with, I had it inside my bag while I was going

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practices the other day,

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, when I returned, my bag was open and I did not find my

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inside.

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, I along with my friends tried all possible ways to find it yet failed in all.

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, I am not able to enter the library without it, and

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by the administration that I will not be allowed to sit for the forthcoming mid-term exams, without the

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, kindly take

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as a request to issue me a brand new student

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. Meanwhile, going forward, I will handle the new

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with care and make sure the same will not repeat. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Jane Simon

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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161 words

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