Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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group

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that we should not mix

both

gender

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genders

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in the schooling system, while

other

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others

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think that it would be

favorable

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to commingle

both

of

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the

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gender

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genders

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in the

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classroom

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class

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classroom

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room

.

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essay

,

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will discuss

both

of the

viewpoint

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viewpoints

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rationally, and

then

I will share my point of view on the matter. On

one

hand, there is a party

who

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that

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has the belief that we should not allow

both

of

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the

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gender

to be in the same

classroom

. people

support

this

notion

due to

two

reasons which are

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religion

and

culture

. When it comes to

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religion

, there are many

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religion

religions

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that has

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prohabited

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prohibited

the idea of mixing

both

of the

sexes

togather

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together

. Islam,

for example

, did not allow

both

of

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gender

to have a friendship in the

first

place, so putting them in

one

room

will not be acceptable in the

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communities. The

second

reason is the

culture

, it is known that

culture

consist

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consists

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of many

aspect

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aspects

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like - norms, folklore, and myths -, and

these

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aspect has

tremendous

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impact on the

notion

of tutoring boys and girls in the schooling system. There are many

culture

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cultures

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has

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that has

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denied the idea of putting

both

of the

sexes

in

one

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form

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from

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form

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. African village, namely, when a

group

of educators visited them, they

shocked

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were shocked

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because they saw that they have separated students into

two

classroom

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classrooms

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.

On the other hand

, we have

the

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group

of

support

the idea of putting

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of

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the

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apply

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gender

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genders

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in

one

classroom

. Generally,

who

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those who

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support

this

suggestion usually have the

tendecy

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tendency

to be more liberal and have an economical viewpoint. The liberal groups prefer to mix

both

of

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the

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gender

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genders

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in

one

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classroom

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class

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classroom

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room

this

is because they believe that it is vital for

both

of the

sexes

to communicate with each other at

young

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a young

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age.

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, most of the

liberal

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liberals

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such

as the United States, Canada, and

UK

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the UK

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are the countries who are pushing the world by

this

is because they have liberal values. The

group

who

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apply

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see

this

conundrum from the

economy

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economic

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aspect. They tend to

support

this

notion

because it is expensive to

builds

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two

school

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schools

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for the same reason, so

by

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putting

both

of

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the

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gender

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genders

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in

one

class

would save money in the

long-run

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long run

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. In conclusion,there are

two

voices when it comes to the suggestion of putting boys and girls under

one

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classroom

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class

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classroom

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room

,

one

would

support

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themsupport

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, and the

second

will not. From my point of view, I would

support

the

notion

of putting

both

of the

sexes

in

one

building

this

is because I extremely believe that

both

of the

sexes

have to get to know each other at

young

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a young

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age. Another reason is

because

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it has been proven that the more diverse the

classroom

the more that diversity will enrich their

experince

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experience

experiences

.