Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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communities. The
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of tutoring boys and girls in the schooling system. There are many
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denied the idea of putting
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of educators visited them, they
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because they saw that they have separated students into
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because it is expensive to
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for the same reason, so
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putting
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would save money in the
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, and the
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of putting
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have to get to know each other at
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it has been proven that the more diverse the
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the more that diversity will enrich their
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experience
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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