owadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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the present decade, the way people communicate with each other radically transformed due to the proliferation of technology.

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,it has its own merits and demerits, but in my perspective, the benefits of

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alteration outweigh the drawbacks,

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, the bond between every individual has strengthened because of technical devices.

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of all, by the advancement of technological gadgets citizens of different nations getting in touch with foreigners without difficulty.To cue

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,a person who lives in South Korea can make friends with somebody from Canada

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the assistance of the internet and social

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.

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that, they can have deep interactions with each other and make strong ties in lieu of going to a cafe or a restaurant with some boring colleagues and classmates and only waste their money and time.To sum up, one of the positive

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of technology is that it creates virtual friends who can help us in many ways.

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, the development of telecommunication has influenced

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people's relationships especially with their families and beloved ones.In

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modern busy world, the crowd do not have an adequate amount of time to spend with their parents, siblings and lovers,so at

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digital devices lend a helping hand.

For instance

, recently, many people emigrate to other countries without their fathers and mothers.

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, they can still make contact with them,

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, they can have free video calls on different applications. To conclude, technology has shifted how communities interacted with each other.

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and time.In my opinion,in the near future,

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artificial intelligence creates unbelievable accessibilities for

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others.