In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household chores. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give relevant examples.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The flow chart illustrates the stages of instant noodles production. Overall,
this
Linking Words
is a linear process that involves 8 different steps before the final product is delivered to the store.
Firstly
Linking Words
, the flour before being accumulated into the storage silos is collected from the truck’s tanks. Following
this
Linking Words
, it is combined with other materials including water and oil to become a mixture by using a special machine. The new substance, which is called dough is
then
Linking Words
stretched into flat sheets and cut into thin strips during the
third
Linking Words
and fourth stage respectively.
Moreover
Linking Words
, it proceeds to another reshaped step to be transformed into the noodles discs. Once the final form is reached, they continue to be cooked in oil
then
Linking Words
dried and begin the packing process. From
this
Linking Words
point, additional ingredients like vegetables and other spices are added to the packaged cups. When all the internal materials are fully included, they are
labeled
Change the spelling
labelled
show examples
and sealed after that. As soon as the final product is ready to leave the factory, it is shipped to consumption places.
Submitted by htphuoc1995 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gender equality
  • Household chores
  • Dual-income families
  • Work-life balance
  • Traditional gender roles
  • Division of labor
  • Egalitarian
  • Mental well-being
  • Societal attitudes
  • Efficiency
  • Domestic responsibilities
  • Cultural norms
  • Upbringing
  • Role models
  • Familial dynamics
What to do next:
Look at other essays: