Some compaies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company having umifom? Are there any benefits of having uniforms for the stuff?

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employees to wear a
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certain kind kind of
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as they are working. It can be argued that workers should be free to choose what they want to wear.
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cloths
for the employees in any
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company
is essential
due to
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such
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client
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client
knows how are the workers in the
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company
.
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anyone
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to the
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company
who are
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responsible
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in
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the place. To
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clarify
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clarify
the importance, if the
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employee leave
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its place suddenly for any reason, and a
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client
come
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come
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to the
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company
where everyone
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different
cloths
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, it
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would
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would
be confusing for that
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client
because he won'
t
t
be able to
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recognise
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recognise
who
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he should talk with. In some cases cases
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this
could bring
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problems
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For instance
, I read an essay in the national newspaper about a
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this
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happened
happen
in a big
company
because the
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thief
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one of the
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, and
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one of the new
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who didn'
t
know that
this
person wasn'
t
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real
stuff
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staff
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. Another point to take into consideration is that some companies have both male and female
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. Setting a certain uniform
ensure
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that there won'
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be any issues
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to the
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. The survey that
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in LPE
company
, a devices
company
contain
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the two genders as employees, can give
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enough
illustration. The survey was done to
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determine
the
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reason
behind the
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unproductivity
productivity
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the male worker. The result shows that the
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majority
of male
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t
able to focus when they
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with their female partners because they
wear
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kind of
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unprofessional
cloths
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. In conclusion, wearing
a certain
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a certain cloth
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cloths
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during
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work is a good deal for both the
company
and its
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staff
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since it prevents any possible
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for the
client
, and it ensures that there won'
t
be any problems related to the
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.
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