Some compaies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company having umifom? Are there any benefits of having uniforms for the stuff?

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day and age, many companies force

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employees to wear a

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certain kind kind of

cloths

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cloths

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as they are working. It can be argued that workers should be free to choose what they want to wear.

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, I take the few that setting a special a special

cloths

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cloths

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for the employees in any

company

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company

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is essential

due to

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the things it can prevent

such

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such

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thifs

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this

thifs

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this

and the miss concentration of some

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stuff

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To begin

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with , the uniforms make the

client

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knows how are the workers in the

company

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company

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In other words

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, it would be obvious

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anyone

come

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to the

company

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company

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who are

the

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responsible

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the place. To

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clarify

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clarify

the importance, if the

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reception's

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receptions

employee leave

leave

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its place suddenly for any reason, and a

client

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client

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come

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come

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to the

company

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company

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where everyone

wore

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different

cloths

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cloths

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, it

wolud

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would

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would

be confusing for that

client

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client

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because he won'

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be able to

reconise

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recognise

reconise

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recognise

who

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he should talk with. In some cases cases

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this

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could bring

problmes

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problems

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, I read an essay in the national newspaper about a

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this

happend

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happened

happen

in a big

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because the

thife

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thief

behave

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one of the

worker

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, and

trick

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one of the new

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client

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who didn'

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know that

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person wasn'

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real

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stuff

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staff

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. Another point to take into consideration is that some companies have both male and female

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stuff

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staff

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. Setting a certain uniform

ensure

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that there won'

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be any issues

connection

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connected

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to the

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cloths

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clothes

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. The survey that

done

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in LPE

company

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, a devices

company

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contain

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the two genders as employees, can give

enogh

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enough

illustration. The survey was done to

detemine

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determine

the

resason

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reason

behind the

unproductivety

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unproductivity

productivity

unproductively

for

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the male worker. The result shows that the

majoity

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majority

of male

weren'

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wasn't

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able to focus when they

work

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worked

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with their female partners because they

wear

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kind of

unprosseional

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unprofessional

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cloths

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clothes

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. In conclusion, wearing

a certain

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a certain cloth

certain cloths

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cloths

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clothes

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during

the

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apply

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work is a good deal for both the

company

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and its

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stuff

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staff

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since it prevents any possible

confusing

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for the

client

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, and it ensures that there won'

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be any problems related to the

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cloths

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clothes

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Jan 3, 2022

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