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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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The bar graph below compares households owning and households renting
accommodation
, in
percent
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, in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, there is a significant increasing
trend
 of owing
accommodation
 for
people
 living in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
On the other hand
, in the same period, renting
accommodation
 reduce popularity.
To begin
 with, in 1918, around 22% of
people
 own a
house
.
However
, the
trend
 of owning a
house
 starts to increase from that year and peak at 69% in 2001. In 2011, there is
slightly
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 decreasing the popularity of owning a
house
 to around 64%. At the beginning of the interval,
people
 tend to
rent
accommodation
 for living. Over 75% of
people
rent
accommodation
 in 1981.
In contrast
, the graph shows a considerably reducing
trend
 of renting
accommodation
. In 2001, there are only around 31% of
people
 that still
rent
 a
house
. The
trend
 start to look better, as in 2011, there are 37% of
people
 came back to
rent
accommodation
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomy
  • Consequence-awareness
  • Self-centered
  • Informal decision-making education
  • Child development
  • Age-appropriate choices
  • Cognitive growth
  • Fostering independence
  • Parental guidance
  • Societal norms
  • Interpersonal consideration
  • Balance of freedom
  • Individualism versus collectivism
  • Experience-based learning
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