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Vaccinating chidren against preventable diseases is not ony unnecessary but also dangerous

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Vaccinating
children
 has become increasingly unpopular among certain demographics of society. These people claim that vaccinations are worthless as well as harmful to
children
's health.
This
 essay will argue the necessity of injections during one's formative years despite some potential risks. Parents have always been wary of vaccinating their
children
. They are concerned about injecting the younger generation with unfamiliar substances that could potentially make them sick. Parents naturally feel protective of their
children
. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of youngsters
unfortunately
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 reacting adversely to their vaccines. These few cases caused adults to lose faith in the need of vaccinating their
children
. Despite the minor risks associated with vaccinating young people, the idea that
this
 is unnecessary and dangerous is completely preposterous. In fact, injections have prevented a vast number of deaths over hundred years in all countries around the world.
This
 figure far outweighs the number of
children
 who have been negatively affected by the immunisations themselves.
Moreover
, some diseases have actually been eradicated through vaccination campaigns. Overall, the idea that vaccines are unhealthy and useless is misinformation and dangerous itself, as could potentially lead to a worse outcome for society.
This
 essay argued that people who are against vaccinations have a flawed understanding of injections and underestimate the output of their beliefs. In my opinion, vaccinating
children
 is an absolute imperative.
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