You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Issues related to traffic congestion are frequently discussed these days. In recent times, declining the necessity for
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individuals
workplace
, educational institute , shopping centre, can assist in Add an article
the workplace
mitigate
the problem of traffic . On the whole , I Change the verb form
mitigating
disgree
with the given statement to a great extent and Correct your spelling
disagree
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the reason
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would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Even though, with limiting Correct article usage
the same
number
of vehicles running on roads and highways can Change the article
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the number
aids
in resolving the issue of traffic rush. As sometimes, people are unnecessary going out for purchasing things that are of no use which makes the road busy. Local authorities need to make some regulations Change the verb form
aid
such
as even and odd policy of car entry. However
, it is not an efficient way . Probably, thevmost
prominent reason to believe Correct your spelling
the most
this
it is practically impossible . As it will disturb the whole economy of the nation. Owing to that fact, people are going to buy things somewhere, it would contribute to earn money and to make state
financially stable.
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the state
Morever
, quality of education and work will Correct your spelling
Moreover
detriorate
automatically by not visiting schools and offices. Correct your spelling
deteriorate
Therefore
, students will get less grades in their academics and companies will not be able to earn optimum profits . All these factors pave the way to less success of
the state. Change preposition
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In addition
, other sectors will also
influcenced
by Correct your spelling
influenced
influence
this
approach. For instance
, car sales will get lower down as individuals will not think it is worth to own
it as if they are not allowed to go Change the verb form
owning
somehere
in it.
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somewhere
although
, vehicles rush could be reduced to some extent by limiting number
of cars . But, it is not solely Change the article
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concern as it is not practically feasible.Submitted by Manvir kaur bhatti on
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