You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Issues related to traffic congestion are frequently discussed these days. In recent times, declining the necessity for
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, educational institute , shopping centre, can assist in
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the problem of traffic . On the whole , I
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disagree
with the given statement to a great extent and
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would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. Even though, with limiting
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of vehicles running on roads and highways can
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in resolving the issue of traffic rush. As sometimes, people are unnecessary going out for purchasing things that are of no use which makes the road busy. Local authorities need to make some regulations
such
as even and odd policy of car entry.
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, it is not an efficient way . Probably,
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it is practically impossible . As it will disturb the whole economy of the nation. Owing to that fact, people are going to buy things somewhere, it would contribute to earn money and to make
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financially stable.
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Moreover
, quality of education and work will
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deteriorate
automatically by not visiting schools and offices.
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, students will get less grades in their academics and companies will not be able to earn optimum profits . All these factors pave the way to less success
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the state.
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, other sectors will
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influenced
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approach.
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, car sales will get lower down as individuals will not think it is worth
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it as if they are not allowed to go
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in it. In conclusion,
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, vehicles rush could be reduced to some extent by limiting
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of cars . But, it is not solely
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concern as it is not practically feasible.
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