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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-aged children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is known that nowadays kids spend too much time
on
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playing computer games or
beeing
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being
 occupied with their mobile phones than twenty years ago. There are different opinions, which result in a discussion whether there should be more Physical Education classes
instead
 of more academic
subjects
. On the one hand, youngsters spend a great deal of their spare time
with
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playing digital games or
by
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chatting
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varoius
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various
 social media.
As a result
,
this
 leads to a sedentary lifestyle. The consequences are obesity with all
further
 damage on the health of the population, which will result in immense costs for the health system.
Furthermore
,
lot
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 of scientists have concluded that the fact of practising exercises actually improves academic performance.
Therefore
, there is a need to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum.
On the other hand
, our
society
 lacks
of
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well-educated labour in the sectors of Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematics.
Moreover
,
the
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society
 is becoming more competitive. Not only good grades but
also
entrance
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 to higher education is needed to find highly paid jobs afterwards.
Thus
, for most
parents
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 it seems to be important that educational bodies offer a wide range of academic
subjects
. Others even argue that it is up to parents to make sure their children participate enough in sport in their free time. In conclusion, it is undeniable that studying core
subjects
such
 as science, foreign languages and mathematics,
for example
, is essential for children to function in today's
society
.
Nevertheless
, in my point of view
subjects
 where the children are
beeing
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being
 active must not be forgotten in the national curriculum in order to prevent health problems, which could damage our
society
 in another way.
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