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Some schools encounter problems with students' behaviour. Why do such problems occur? What is the role of family in this situation?

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Some schools confront issues of
students
' bad acts. In
this
 essay, I will present a couple of reasons why
children
 behave badly and discuss the essential role which their family should play. These days, it is said that the
parents
 tend to have a seldom strong attention for
children
.
Although
 there are some possible causes, one of the most prominent reasons would be the
parents
' dedication to the work. Because they do not have sufficient time to teach their
children
 how to behave politely in society.
Therefore
,
students
 might not have enough knowledge to interact with the other person.
Furthermore
, the other possible reason is their inability to study. If
students
 can not achieve a good performance in an examination, they sometimes may behave badly. Indeed, working hard is a vital thing for a living, but
parents
 should make more communication with their
children
 and teach them what the right behaviour is in school.
Furthermore
,
parents
' frequent Interaction with teachers
also
 plays a pivotal role in terms of building a positive environment for
students
.
For example
, in Japan, it is a usual thing for
parents
 to keep a diary about their
children
's behaviour at home and hand out it to the teacher.
Additionally
,
parents
 sometimes teach their
children
 some subjects in school. In conclusion, the possible reasons for
students
' negative behaviour would be the lack of communication with their family and the delay in the study.
Thus
, in order to solve these,
parents
 should interact with their
children
 more frequently and sometimes make advice to them about the school curriculum.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disciplinary actions
  • misconduct
  • unruly behavior
  • delinquent behavior
  • disciplinary measures
  • individual choices
  • negative peer pressure
  • family dynamics
  • parental supervision
  • parental guidance
  • parent-child relationship
  • role models
  • communication gap
  • moral values
  • ethical values
  • technological advancements
  • deteriorating behavior
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