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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is much discussed and debated whether students should
study
 alone or
study
 in groups. There are some advantages regarding studying independently;
however
, it is clear to me that
group
 work would lead to better productivity On the one hand, self-
study
 may be advantageous in certain circumstances. In
group
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study
, it goes without saying that small talks may frequently happen
ranging
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 from dissent to unrelated or trivial topics,
thus
 leading to a waste of time.
In contrast
, not only does self-studying save time
,
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it
also
 gives them the freedom to
study
 at their own pace. One does not need to either increase their speed, which may result in the vagueness of some points
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 or decrease it to wait for others.
On the other hand
, it seems to me that studying in a
group
 has the edge over studying alone.
First
 of all, studying together does one’s improvement good. Everyone may make mistakes or misunderstand some points occasionally. Without a
group
 to catch mistakes and help to clarify one’s misinterpretation, it is likely that pupils may not fully understand the material, no matter how hard they have worked.
Moreover
,
studyingstudy
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studying study
 in a
group
 would be more beneficial when it comes to dealing with challenging tasks. Basically, everyone has their strengths and weaknesses,
then
 each
members
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 may help their co-members to have a better understanding
on
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 specific areas.
Also
, teaching back knowledge
which
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 one has acquired is a good opportunity to gain long-term memory on the matter. In conclusion, while studying individually has some beneficial effects on oneself, I believe
group
study
 can bring us more effective consequences
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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