Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most significant issues that many people of today’s society are very concerned about is

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. Some people believe that schools

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spend too much

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on teaching facts rather than teaching practical skills.

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fact has changed positively in recent years. My point of view is that all

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should be studied facts and

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equally in order to could apply in reality when they graduated. To put it another way,

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not enough

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to practice.

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confused when they have to do it in real life. In fact, most

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of

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as elementary school, high school consume a lot of

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for theory and probably not enough

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for practice.

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, pupils are taught full

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for a variety of subjects,

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as maths, literature, history, geography in primary level so there is too

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left for practical skills like how to apply maths in reality.

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, there are better improvements in higher

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,

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as college or university.

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are appropriately divided into their timetables between theory and practice. In the past,

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used to do

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in their final year, but recently they have gone to the field from the

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year to the

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year on a regular basis. To conclude, it is irrefutable that there is

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equal between learning facts and learning practical skills in almost all

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of

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, it seems to be changing better in higher

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and we can hope that the

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industry will gradually improve

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