The production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why is global warming considered one of the most severe issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved.

In the
last
decade, there is a controversial argument over whether global warming
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that is
caused by different factors like harmful gasses . In
this
essay ,I am going to examine
this
question that why increasing the temperature of our planet is important and
then
I will give some solutions to tackle
this
problem. Physically , by increasing temperature , we can see all the glaciers which are located at the north and south of the Earth will be melted .
Therefore
, the level of the water of oceans is going to raise .
On the other hand
, all the animals and creatures which are living in these areas are going to extinct , so we will lose the endemics of that habitat.
Moreover
, with rising
the
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temperature , in other parts of the planet that we already have a little rain and humidity , deserts will be improved and expanded , so the amount of dearth and famine is going to increase too. These days scientists try hard to find the solutions and a few months ago all the countries and their governments hold a huge conference in one of the European countries to solve
this
issue. They agreed to cooperate with each other and
also
decrease the
amount
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of fossil energies that they are using for their industries . They
also
decided to invest their money in energies that are suitable for our
environment
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,
such
as solar panels, wind turbines, and tidal energies. In conclusion, it is proved that carbon footprint can motivate the circumstances of global warming ,so ,in my opinion,
this
problem is not only on the shoulder of governments ,but
also
it is the
citizens
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responsibility.
for example
, they could use public transportation
instead
of using their personal cars or they should use unleaded petrol to decrease pollution .And in the end by developing technology they can buy electric cars which have no air pollution .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • greenhouse gases
  • atmospheric heating
  • global warming
  • extreme weather events
  • rising sea levels
  • ecosystem disruption
  • heatwaves
  • droughts
  • species extinction
  • economic implications
  • disaster relief
  • tipping points
  • renewable energy
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon sequestration
  • reforestation
  • afforestation
  • sustainable agriculture
  • methane
  • nitrous oxide
  • international agreements
  • Paris Agreement
  • emissions reduction
  • lifestyle changes
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