The movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

Nowadays, urbanisation is commonly

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in the world and lead to some issues in the rural and urban areas. There are several

problems

why people choose to live in

cities

than

villages

and certain specific ways to solve the

problems

. Primarily, the

cities

are attractive to society to live

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to some reasons.

To begin

with, the big

cities

have thousands of

job

opportunity

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opportunities

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for

job

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the job

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seeker

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,

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with the towns. Those who are educated are more likely to get a better

job

such

as

work

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in a big company or

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a leader of one institution.

Moreover

, a big city has

also

better access to

public

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facility

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.

For instance

,

the

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public transportation

which

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is very well-developed with modern technology. It gives much more benefits for people who have

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high mobility so they can save their time.

However

, potential ways to tackle these

problems

may include the following. A very low chance to get a

job

in the small

villages

should be the main issue for the

government

. The

government

can open more investment from companies owner to develop their business in the

villages

so society would not move out from their

villages

.

In addition

,

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better public transportation

such

as buses and trains are

also

needed so the society will think that their rural area has

good

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facility to live

.

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Like in Papua, the

government

of Indonesia tried to develop roads and buses so local people can use them to do their daily activities. To sum up,

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even though

the issue of living in

cities

will generate some

problems

, it seems that the

government

ought to take

firm

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stand on

this

issue and build

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better public transportation in the rural areas.