During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In you letter • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Way why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear

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Kim, My name is Phuong Hoai, who sat

next

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to you on the plane from Ha Noi to Ho Chi Minh City

on

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last

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Friday. That was a wonderful plane journey because of meeting you. I am writing

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letter to say thank you for your offer about working in one of your restaurants. I know that there are many positions to work in the

restaurant

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. I am really interested in cooking, so I hope to work in your

restaurant

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as a cooker.

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I just have done

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my study at the

University

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and do not have much experience

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in

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a restaurant

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restaurant

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, I will try my best to do it.

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that, my parents have a small

restaurant

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and I always help them not only

cooking

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food but

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serving

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serve

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customers.

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, I believe that I can do the job if you give me

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chance. I am looking forward to

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you soon. Thanks and Best regards PHUONG HOAI