During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In you letter • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Way why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear
Mr.
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Kim, My name is Phuong Hoai, who sat
next
to you on the plane from Ha Noi to Ho Chi Minh City
on
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last
Friday. That was a wonderful plane journey because of meeting you. I am writing
this
letter to say thank you for your offer about working in one of your restaurants. I know that there are many positions to work in the
restaurant
. I am really interested in cooking, so I hope to work in your
restaurant
as a cooker.
Although
I just have done
of
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my study at the
University
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and do not have much experience
about
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a restaurant
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restaurant
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, I will try my best to do it.
Besides
that, my parents have a small
restaurant
and I always help them not only
cooking
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food but
also
serving
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customers.
Therefore
, I believe that I can do the job if you give me
this
chance. I am looking forward to
hear
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you soon. Thanks and Best regards PHUONG HOAI
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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