Some people consider corruption to be the root cause of problems in government organizations and politics. What problems arise due to this corruption? What are possible solutions to eradicate corruption?
Corruption
is discussed by many people
as the main cause for organizations and politics on
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the government
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corruption
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First
of all, stakeholders in this
sector do not have good recognizing
for social Replace the word
recognition
beacause
they do not have responsibilities on their duty. Correct your spelling
because
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, some police help lawbreakers out and do not punish them and the juries let criminals out of jail quicker than it
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they
Secondly
, the bigger size of institutions are, the easier people
can corruption
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corrupt
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Consequently
, it is hard to examine and find the cheating.
Moving on to several solutions to eradicate corruption
. Reporting every single expenses
is the easiest way to handle Change to a singular noun
expense
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problem on low
budget, resulting in Add an article
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need
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needing
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Furthermore
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projects
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showing
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overall the government
get the best outcome from this
way. Lastly
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bad things by increasing the penalty level for Wrong verb form
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people
who likely
to corrupt the things Add a missing verb
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Consequently
, the punishment will make them fear and do not have any idea to do it.
To sum up, many causes and solving ways that corruption
is the key to destroy
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destroying
government
institutions and politics. The government
should focus more on cut
down Wrong verb form
cutting
this
problem and utilizing the public budget only on
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