Some people consider corruption to be the root cause of problems in government organizations and politics. What problems arise due to this corruption? What are possible solutions to eradicate corruption?

Corruption
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government
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sector.
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it
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and
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some possible
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for it. There are many roots why
corruption
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happen
happened
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sector.
First
of all, stakeholders in
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sector do not have good
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for social
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because
they do not have responsibilities on their duty.
For example
, some police help lawbreakers out and do not punish them and the juries let criminals out of jail quicker than
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should be.
Secondly
, the bigger size of institutions are, the easier
people
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corruption
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in many ways which are they could take money away or buy
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low quality
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product
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to use.
Consequently
, it is hard to examine and find the cheating. Moving on to several solutions to eradicate
corruption
. Reporting every single
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is the easiest way to handle
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budget, resulting in
people
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to be more careful
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when they use the public money and work in the best as they can.
Furthermore
, splitting every project and
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into small
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projects
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would be easier to monitor the results from everyone. To illustrate, there
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a report
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small task like
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.
Then
overall the
government
get the best outcome from
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, rising in the cost of
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bad things by increasing the penalty level for
people
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to corrupt the things
such
as finding the many
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times from one staff effects to fire or blacklist for their entire life.
Consequently
, the punishment will make them fear and do not have any idea to do it. To sum up, many causes and solving ways that
corruption
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government
institutions and politics. The
government
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down
this
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rule of law
  • inefficient resource allocation
  • economic development
  • cynicism
  • distrust
  • governmental institutions
  • distorts market mechanisms
  • foreign investments
  • legislative frameworks
  • transparent laws
  • monitoring and enforcement mechanisms
  • anti-corruption bodies
  • culture of integrity
  • ethical behavior
  • public campaigns
  • accessibility
  • protection
  • whistleblowers
  • retaliation
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