Modern building change the character and appearance of towns and cities.The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certainly, change is the law of nature.
However
, in
this
burgeoning domain, due to the manufacturing of sky-scrappers, all cities are looking more spectacular and amazing. It is the responsibility of higher authorities to conserve the cultural identity of the nation by insisting on architecture to make the new buildings in conventional styles. I would firmly agree with the notion which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, nowadays due to urbanisation and high competition people like to migrate from one place to another and one city to another city for various purposes
such
as jobs, study and for setting up their own business because of that manufacturing of new buildings are on their peaks and within few months the whole appearance of the town changes rapidly.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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