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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The maps compare two of the health centre buildings with project A is the old one built in 2005 and proposal B where is the building looks in
this
 day. Overall, the size of the building a long time ago was smaller than now,
this
 reduced the garden size as an impact for the extended building. In detail, regarding method A and program B from the similarities, we can see from the maps that both buildings have the same physiotherapy and office room with the same location during the two periods. Even though the garden and car parking place has exactly the same spots as in 2005,
however
, the garden looks a bit smaller and the car parking can fill more up to 30 cars in the present day. Turning back to the differences between the two maps, the big differences can be noticed from the entrance where the old office had its entrance in the south while the new building's map shows the entrance located in the southwest leading to the reception desk and children's play area.
Moreover
, the room's number
also
 increases from 3 in 2005 to 4 rooms in the present day.
Likewise
, the seats have increased in size due to allowing more patients to get comfortable seats while waiting for their appointments.
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