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Nowadays children are consuming too many suger based drinks . What are the reasons and solutions of the problem

#children #suger #drinks
These days youngsters
desiers
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desires
 to drink or eat unhealthy
products
 or packet foods which can be harmful to
there
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their
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 health, there are numerous
of
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apply
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causes and solutions of
these problem
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this problem
these problems
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.
Firstly
, children want to consume
alot
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a lot
 of
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insufficient
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unsufficient
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insufficient
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 kinds of food
product
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products
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 because the
telivision
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television
adevertisiment
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advertisement
 shows packet foods and drinks
insted
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instead
 of encouraging the
socity
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society
city
 to eat and drink
health
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healthy
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 items, and
othere
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other
 problems like the
products
 are
alot
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a lot
 cheap and can
be find
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 everywhere.
Secondly
, there are many solutions to
this
 problem,
for instance
, Government should increase taxes on unhealthy
products
, or the parents should know the importance of eating and drinking healthy
products
 like vegetables, fruits or
jucies
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juices
.
On the other hand
, youths should
also
 be educated in
school
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a school
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 for doing
exersies
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exercise
exercises
, yoga and meditation to stay healthy. To conclude, the Government, family members or the
ealderly
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elderly
 people should encourage the youths to eat and drink
health
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healthily
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, or to
exersie
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exercise
 daily.
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