Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view.

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In the information era, most
people
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have modern technologies which can access the Internet that can turn some
libraries
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into
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projects.To my knowledge, while
people
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have better and cheaper do-it-yourself ways to
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information into the brain,
libraries
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are still essential for a locality. There are many arguments in
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of building free
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. The
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and most important reason is, when the Internet has become a common thing for many
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, there are still some
people
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who cannot access the Internet even today. In general, they are the elderly or the homeless or the poor, ethnic minorities living in some kind of middle of nowhere. For most of them, the
library
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, from the point of view of young
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, is the
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place for them to update the world and learn new knowledge.
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to say, local councils need to reconsider the need for a free
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, as one of their duties is to ensure that everyone has a right to education.
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: poor
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and women woman in some
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states in
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east are not allowed or do not have enough
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to be educated.So that most of
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country
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are poor and backward compared to the world.If a
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not
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focus on
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,Illiteracy will spread, the
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will fall into a political and humanitarian crisis if the
people
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are not educated enough to give up the grisly customs and brain drain when
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study again and try to escape to a foreign
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where conditions are better
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, it is understandable why a small percentage of
people
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disagree with the
library
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construction proposal. Apart from
libraries
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, there are many other ways for those retarded
people
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to acquire information and knowledge.
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, they can read newspapers, watch TV, and some of them are
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free nowadays.
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, it is generally believed that learning is not the most crucial thing for those
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, in comparison with establishing free
libraries
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, the improvement of healthcare and the construction of other welfare infrastructures or just giving them financial aid
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obviously more necessary at the moment. And these measures
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need a great deal of money and
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aid In conclusion, while there are many other things that need to be prioritized for the town government, the right to read and learn is still important, and
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building a free
library
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should be considered but in a higher position.
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