Some people say that the government should pay for the public healthcare and education while others say it is not the governments responsibility do you agree or disagree?

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There is

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divergent

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about government policy. Some people believe that governments should concentrate on paying for

the

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public healthcare and even

education

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contrast

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, some believe that healthcare and

education

are not associated with government and authorities should focus on other subjects. In the following paragraphs, I intend to outline the arguments of both sides. It is true and irrefutable

that is

the

governments

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responsibility to make basic health and primary

education

. If government increase the public health level, there will be

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infectious diseases.

For instance

, during the COVID-19 pandemic. When people got infected and the symptoms were relieved if there was a free cure for

this

virus and sick people got the cure as soon as possible, it would eradicate

this

illness at the beginning.

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might have a positive impact on

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economy.

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education

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its own benefit for society. The reason is that the nation’s prosperity very much depends on the contribution made by its well-educated citizens.

Initially

, students with low financial strength

are not worry

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are not worried

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about paying tuition. They can completely focus on their lessons to get higher grades and get a degree.

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they can think about job prospects and get hired in a place with a good salary.

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, individuals who live in

a rural areas

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with narrow

circumstance

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can get educated.

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they can discover their capacity. In

other ward

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, ensuring these elements can secure their future and it will solve so many issues in current society. After having explored

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have reached the conclusion that governments should pay for

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public healthcare and

education

and I completely agree with

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view.

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Believe private schools and private hospitals can be available for those who want and can

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,but

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free schools and free hospitals should always be there.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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304 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Universal health care
Socio-economic background
Government-backed
Economic growth
Workforce
Innovations
Bureaucracy
One-size-fits-all solutions
Private sectors
Fundamental right
Public funding
Health care and education standards
Efficiency
Inefficiency
Economic development
Public health
Taxation
Competitiveness
Quality of services
Access to education

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Some people say that the government should pay for the public healthcare and education while others say it is not the governments responsibility do you agree or disagree?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Do we have to plan for future or stay focused on our present what is your opinion and why ? provide example to support your stand.