Nowadays people tend to change a few careers during life. What are the reasons for this, in your opinion? Do you think it is good for the society as a whole?

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In the era of technology , finding
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become one of the most important issues
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,meanwhile, some people change their occupations several times . I am going to talk about why some public find various careers in their lifetime and
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I will give my own opinion . The main reason why people change their
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repeatedly is that they do not love their work ,and they do not enjoy it .
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, some of the workers do not earn enough
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which is really important for the families,so they are always looking for suitable works that have enough revenue.
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, some prominent
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try to hire the best
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,so they always want to steal other
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workers.
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, some institutes offer more
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to other
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employees
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, in
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way ,workers become motivated to change their
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. In my opinion , I think leaving a job has two points of view. sometimes it can help people to find their dream
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that were always in their
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.
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it can help them to find lucrative revenue ,especially when they find enough experience.
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, changing work can have a lot of side effects for
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,to illustrate
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this employers
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must spend a lot of time and
money
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for their
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to increase their experience ,but after a
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their labours prefer to leave them for any reason ,so it can be a kind of loss for them . In conclusion, it seems that ,
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replacing occupation has some benefits for
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,
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as reaching their goals or finding more
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, it becomes one of the most important issues of
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which has so many damages for them ,like wasting
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and time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • career mobility
  • lifelong learning
  • job satisfaction
  • economic factors
  • market dynamics
  • redundancy
  • work-life balance
  • skill set
  • adaptation
  • innovation
  • personal growth
  • vocational evolution
  • technological advancements
  • workforce diversification
  • expertise development
  • professional transition
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