The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays,women have an important role in the workplace.The number of females who have a job has increased in the recent century.Some people tell most of the legal issues which happen in our community is due to women do not bring up

children

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and prefer to work outside.I disagree with

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idea because the training of

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depends on many factors

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as family environment and media which influence them. In my opinion, society changed compared to the past.

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to

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who work outside families are smaller and the impaction of another person like grandmother and grandfather almost are eliminated in

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decades

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offsprings are alone in

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.

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,media platforms and the virtual world have more effects on them than their

mothers

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.Even the parents are at

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children

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do not have the desire to talk with them and tend to spend their

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in front of the computer.

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,in the fast ,pace world

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mindset is more different than their guardians.Women who are at

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tell they are not good at some technical skills to help their

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.Most of these families send their

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to Classes for teaching them .Obviously,

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are not at

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,they are under various sources of training that makes the role of

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less.Imagine in Canada a child who goes to school for six hours and spend three hours in a private class to learn to play the piano ,the

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she/he is with their mother is less than the

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he/she is in school. In conclusion,bringing up

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are complex all of citizens are engaged in

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situation teachers,computers and

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are in the

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line to train moral behaviour in

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,the authorities have a crucial role because they can improve the atmosphere to prevent some crimes

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set up laws to help

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who work to have more

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for their

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