You are planning a 2-day work training outside your city next month. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding the accommodation arrangements for your visit. In your letter, you should: • introduce yourself and your company • ask the availability of their rooms • tell him / her your every arrangement and needs.

Dear sir/madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I will be in
Melboure
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Melbourne

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on
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early
next
months, so that, I would like to book a
room
in your hotel for 2 night staying. My name is June, I am
an
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a

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horticulture technician and I work in a company called Brightlight. I will
be attend
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a 2 days horticulture
trainning
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training

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courses In your city.
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, I want to ask you
of
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apply

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what types of
the
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apply

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rooms are
avalaiable
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available

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on the dates that I have been
meantioned
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mentioned

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to you before. I
perfer
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prefer

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to have a queen deluxe
room
with a private spa and a
balcoly
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balcony

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however
, is it depending on your hotel vacancy.
Also
, I want to book a conference
room
for 10 people, the meeting
room
need
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needs

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to have a screen projector, writing
whitebroad
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whiteboard

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and a coffee machine. Please organise
a hide cars
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a hide car
hide cars

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and a driver for me, as I am not
famillar
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familiar

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with Melbourne traffic, could you please tell the driver be prepare for work from 8am to 9pm from the day I arrived until I check out. Please let me know as soon as possible because I need to report to my boss, and please
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contact

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contract
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contact

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me
by
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on

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my mobile 0402043289 as
this
is
convinience
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convenience

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than
a
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writting
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writing

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. Yours sincerely June
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