You are planning a 2-day work training outside your city next month. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding the accommodation arrangements for your visit. In your letter, you should: • introduce yourself and your company • ask the availability of their rooms • tell him / her your every arrangement and needs.

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Dear sir/madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I will be in

Melboure

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Melbourne

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early

months, so that, I would like to book a

room

in your hotel for 2 night staying. My name is June, I am

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horticulture technician and I work in a company called Brightlight. I will

be attend

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a 2 days horticulture

trainning

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training

courses In your city.

Therefore

, I want to ask you

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apply

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what types of

the

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apply

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rooms are

avalaiable

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available

on the dates that I have been

meantioned

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mentioned

to you before. I

perfer

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prefer

to have a queen deluxe

room

with a private spa and a

balcoly

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balcony

however

, is it depending on your hotel vacancy.

Also

, I want to book a conference

room

for 10 people, the meeting

room

need

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to have a screen projector, writing

whitebroad

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whiteboard

and a coffee machine. Please organise

a hide cars

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a hide car

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and a driver for me, as I am not

famillar

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familiar

with Melbourne traffic, could you please tell the driver be prepare for work from 8am to 9pm from the day I arrived until I check out. Please let me know as soon as possible because I need to report to my boss, and please

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contact

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contract

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contact

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my mobile 0402043289 as

this

convinience

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convenience

than

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apply

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writting

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writing

. Yours sincerely June

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1Word repetition
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21Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

215 words

6.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Clear and correct grammar

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