You are planning a 2-day work training outside your city next month. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding the accommodation arrangements for your visit. In your letter, you should: • introduce yourself and your company • ask the availability of their rooms • tell him / her your every arrangement and needs.

Dear Sir or Ma'am

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letter is being written in regarding the accommodation arrangements for my business trip

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month. I am Manvir

kaur

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, one of the

dentist

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at National Dental College and Hospital Chandigarh. I am coming to Delhi in the upcoming month for conducting work training sessions as an external tutor from the

University

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side. I want to ask you about

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availability

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of a single room with an attached bathroom on dates 21 St and 22nd February. It would be amazing if I get a deluxe room. I would like to highlight a few key things which you consider while making

booking

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. Meals including breakfast, lunch and dinner must be included with my room booking. If it is convenient for you, kindly send a can

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the airport for pick up service as

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is my

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visit

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Delhi. I hope you take all my points into consideration before confirming any booking. If you need any information feel free to contact me at 8195097406 .

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send me details of my booking at manvirbhatti5@gmail Com Yours Sincerely

Manvit

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Invite

Manvel

Lauren.

Manvir kaur bhatti

Jan 6, 2022

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