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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

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 present era,
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 is vastly being utilised to educate
students
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. The old method of educating a plethora of learners have been changed with the approach of
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. So in
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 I'm going to discuss
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pros and cons of
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 new application by analysing
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education
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 ,poverty and access problem.
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 have more opportunities to choose their
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 due to the
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 and other facilities.
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, learners can attend online
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 without going
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the
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 particular learning institute. It would be beneficial to the learner who is currently working.
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, they can able to get
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 , achieve new skills in
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 method.
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 to that, Because of the pandemic
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 most
of
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the
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individuals tend to use virtual
classes
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 as an option to gain their goal and which is leads to
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 on-line based
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 universities in European countries.
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,it has clearly stated that virtual class has
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positive
 impacts
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 the learners.
On the other hand
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, Due to the poverty and lack
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 products or access
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,some people could not learn even they want.
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, During the pandemic duration , government introduce
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virtual
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 to teenagers. Unfortunately,
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authority
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 could not measure how it
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to
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students
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 whose parents do not have sufficient money to spend
for
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 these facilities.Some parents could not afford
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 or expenses for internet
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facilities
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 for their children.
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 to that even they have
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 equipment , due to the network connection
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couldn't
 able to concentrate properly on virtual
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.
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, there is a negative influence In
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, when
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 about poor people and other facilities . In conclusion, with the
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 development, there
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possitive
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positive
 influence on individual's
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 outweigh the drawbacks.Government should get
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 with the particular authority to overcome those negative
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influences
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such
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 the network facility ,
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 tab or computer needy
students
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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