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The bar graph compares the ratio of graduates who do not have a job since graduated from their university in one of the Western countries from 2008 and 2009 divided by their genders. It can be seen from the graph that guy had the highest unemployment rates during the given period and October is the month where the graduates male mostly jobless. In detail, in January 2008, 10% of unemployment were boys while half of them were girls. In the
next
 three months, the number of males who did not have a job decreased by almost half to 7% and was stable until July 2008 before increasing dramatically to more than 15% of males was unemployed. These patterns
also
 showed in girls who did not have any job during the same months and year. In January 2009, men who were unemployed had success to reduce their unemployment rates from 16% in October 2008 to 12%.
Likewise
, women
also
 had reduced their workless rates from 11% to 9% in January 2009 and dropped drastically to 6% in April in the same year.
However
, both boys and girls observed an upward trend in October 2009 where boy reached their peaked at over 20% and
this
 is the highest number of unemployed rate during the given period. lady only increased by 4% at the end of the period.
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