Many countries spend large amounts of money on preparing competitors in major world sporting events such as the Olympic Games and football World Cup. Instead, this money can be spent on encouraging children to take up sports at a young age.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sports
have always been a highly controversial issue. It is often argued that it would have far-reaching outcomes if the budget allocated to
world
championships
such
as the Olympic games as well as the Football
world
cup by the government , was specialized to the kids to encourage them to take
sports
seriously.
This
essay will discuss why I partly agree and disagree with
this
belief.
To begin
, it is imperative to advocate the sport's
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majors financially due to two reasons.
First
and most is its crucial role in young generations' setting goals as they can see the lucrative income of the prominent athletes.In England,
for example
, most of alpha and generation Z crave to be football players just by the inspiration of David Beckham. The
second
reason is the national pride and credit
that is
highly likely to be obtained by the
sports
teams in outstanding international competitions. Take Iran as an example,its residents have been known to the
world
by wrestling as Iranian wrestlers have always been prolific champions.
On the other hand
, money allocation to the kids' department for the purpose of incentivising them to
sports
can affect the community tremendously.Indeed,there is no shadow of a doubt that there
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plethora of juveniles and juniors in different angles of
this
world
especially developing countries
such
as Afghanistan and Pakistan , who are under-privileged despite their talents and in a pressing need of
this
financial aid to nurture their competencies and flourish. Ultimately, by adopting
this
approach not only do the children as individuals benefit but
also
the whole community. In conclusion, I reaffirm my position on partially agreeing disagreeing with the notion of investing a fortune in youth clubs rather than the global competitive fields as it tends to help the people be swelled with pride as well as being a motif for the children . Simultaneously,
this
might open an array of opportunities for the deprived,highly gifted children.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • grassroots sports
  • lifelong love for physical activity
  • physical well-being
  • teamwork
  • discipline
  • perseverance
  • nurture potential talent
  • healthier societies
  • accessibility
  • inclusivity
  • national pride
  • unity
  • economic boost
  • global recognition
  • balanced approach
  • elite sports
  • funding
  • long-term benefits
  • exposure to sports
  • youth sports
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