You want to hold a surprise party for a friend who is visiting his home town after a long time from a foreign country. Write a letter to a common friend asking for his help in organizing the party and in your letter: Write the reasons for organizing the party Describe when, where and how you would be organizing the party Ask your friend to meet you in person for further discussions

Dear Jimmy, Hoping
your
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in great shape,
Im
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I'm
writing
this
letter to inform you that
im
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I'm
planning to organize a
party
for a friend visiting our home town. If you can remember Bert my groomsman during my wedding,He is coming home to have a vacation in our place.About a decade past he was not around in our country.We could throw him a memorable experienced that he could not forget during his visit.When it comes to
best
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ideas on organizing a
party
you are the one that
i
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could say the
mastershowman
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master showman
.
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the
party
that you
organize
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during our reunion is exemplary,each
attendees
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have so much fun.If possible we could ready gym in
townplaza
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town plaza
on
this
coming
friday
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Friday
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12th of
july
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July
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.
This
coming
monday
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Monday
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if you have
freetime
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free time
on
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in
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the afternoon, we could meet in
freyas
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Freya's
restaurant across
the
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municipal hall.We will
also
discuss
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the budget
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and
other person
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another person
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that may help us during the
party
. Thank you very much, Your friend, Evan
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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