you are not satisfied with the changing rooms ina sports centers that you visit.write aletter to the sports center manager in you letter. Explain the problems say how feel about this problem,and say what you would like the manager to talk

Dear Mam I am writing to complain about the state of the female changing
room
at the sports complex. I have been using the
gym
for several years in your sports complex. Now,and it would not appear that no maintenance work has been carried out on the changing
room
facilities in all that time.
As a result
of the changing
room
the paint is peeling of the walls, the floor there are cracked, and mould and mildew growing around the shower The Neglected the state of the changing
room
makes me think that do not properly care about your customers. I feel that being treated like farm animals. I worry about putting over health risks.The changing
room
is the best
room
in your
gym
.But all
gym
join female uses the
room
not comfortable. It seems
that is
more important than the customers experience long customers best source of the
gym
income. Please address the changing
room
issues as a matter of
urgent
Replace the word
urgency

The word urgent doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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.I suggest that a full required, and should be considered some form of compensation for members .we have tolerated
this
situation too long. your faithfully love Preet
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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