Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country

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In today's world,
people
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travel to
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country
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abroad in order to seek more opportunities
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as jobs, living qualities, experiences and many more. Some
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consider moving to a foreign
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and
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pursue
their life there. It is argued among many
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the
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of living in
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a foreign
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country
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varios
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various
reasons.
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, both
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of view will be
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essay.
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, living in
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can cause you various disadvantages and required a lot of your patients.
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,
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as language barrier is the most common thing that you will have to deal with each day and it might lead to disadvantages.
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, when
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • quality education
  • high standard of living
  • diverse cultures
  • strong healthcare system
  • career advancement
  • safe and stable environment
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