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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #waste #time
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Since the
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 few decades, technology has changed the world in a lot of different ways. It has been argued by the
people
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 that, it is a complete waste of time to learn other
languages
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 because today generation
computers
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 allow quick and easy translation of any
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.
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, others believe that using
computers
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 everywhere is not possible and
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 learning foreign
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 can help to
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 in an era of globalization. On one hand, Artificial Intelligence has manifolds in recent years because of which it is
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 waste of time to learn the technology which can be performed by
computers
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 effectively like
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language
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a language
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 translator. It takes a lot of time to master any
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 and even after learning,
people
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 are reluctant to communicate in
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language
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 due to their fluency.
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,
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the computer
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 translates in
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 and accurate way without much work involved.
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, in 2015, I went to Mexico for
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 where I was unable to communicate with local
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 and google translator helped me
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 with
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, it is difficult for humans to carry
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 everywhere for translation. Due to the accessibility and portability problem of
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, it is better to learn different
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. Understanding
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different
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allow
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people
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 to communicate effectively,
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 in the world of globalization where
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 community with each other from different countries.
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, in March 2021, Amazon had a conference in Germany, and it was easy for me to understand because I have learnt German when I was in high school. In
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 instances,
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 are not useful.
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,
people
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 should not always rely on
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a computer
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computer
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 rather they should try to learn themselves. To sum up, both the arguments have valid points but I think
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 should rely less on machines rather they should focus on learning
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 and developing
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a skill
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skill set
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 to communicate effectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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