You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do not need to write any addresses

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to inform you about our recent experience

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your restaurant

this

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weekend.We live

accross

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across

the street nearby your establishment.Our family dropped by for a dinner gathering and

wife

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is craving

for

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lasagna one of your main pasta.But to surprise us we did not enjoy much of the

food

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Saturday,me and my spouse celebrated our

10th year

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annivesarry

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anniversary

wedding.Since

your

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just

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accross

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the street and accessible to us,we decide to dine-in in your restaurant.My wife really

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italian

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food

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,as a line of your

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she expected

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much. Surprisingly when

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is served we observe that portioning was

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small

compare

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with your ads in the

menuboard

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menu board

.She was

totaly

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dissapointed

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disappointed

when she taste the bland

lasagana

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lasagna

that she ordered.As well as the serving of the garlic bread on the side,

cheese

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was still cold and not melted. Service is good and

ambience

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is relaxing but kindly

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your chief to

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the serving portion and taste of the

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. Thank you for your consideration, Faithfully yours, Evan

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

173 words

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