Group or team activities can teach more important skill for life than those activities which are done alone.Do you agree or disagree?

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the human civilization people tend to flock together whether it is a hunt or a religious attend,while
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part in life that can be teaching us to aid with the experience that we need to attain for our future other than staying and pursuing them alone.I Definitely agree
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the argument above mentioned.
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,when we are contributing our precious
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a project or a study case it is better to continue with the bunch of people as in a group of people.Because each and every person tend not to have
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quality,there are specific qualities that each person consist of.
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to improve the manner of obeying rules and carrying out the
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and most importantly,conducting any
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management is a good quality that everyone should possess.On top of that teamwork have been a great deal with the children as well.Children
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to be playful and
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category,because they neither feel comfortable in
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instance when they are in kindergarten they ought to be playing minor games with each other.
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when they realise the importance of team play and managing
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throughout the activity. In conclusion,I would like to say that continuing any specific activity as a team will be more realistic and effective other than doing it alone.Nowadays
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have succeeded
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proving that.
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