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waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The line graph illustrates the tonnage of
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 which was produced by
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companies
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 over 15 years from 2000 to 2015. Overall, there is a clear tendency of reducing the amount of
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 by two
companies
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,
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 one
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 experienced a significant increase over the period.
Companies
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 A and
B
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 succeed in reducing the amount of produced
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, starting for
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 A at the top point of 12
tonnes
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 in 2000. In the same year
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company
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B
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 released about 8
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 of trash.
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B
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 experience a small rise to almost 10
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, it can be seen from the graph that both
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 significantly reduced the amount of
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. In 20015 for
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A
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the number is 8
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 and for
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company
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B
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 is 3. According to the line graph
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company
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 C experienced an increase during the whole period of time, in 2000 3
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 of
waste
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 was released, and in 2015 the number reached its highest point of almost 10
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 produced.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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