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waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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The line graph illustrates the tonnage of
waste
 which was produced by
few
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companies
 over 15 years from 2000 to 2015. Overall, there is a clear tendency of reducing the amount of
waste
 by two
companies
,
although
 one
company
 experienced a significant increase over the period.
Companies
 A and
B
 succeed in reducing the amount of produced
waste
, starting for
company
 A at the top point of 12
tonnes
 in 2000. In the same year
company
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B
 released about 8
tonnes
 of trash.
Although
company
B
 experience a small rise to almost 10
tonnes
, it can be seen from the graph that both
companies
 significantly reduced the amount of
waste
. In 20015 for
company
A
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the number is 8
tonnes
 and for
the
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company
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B
 is 3. According to the line graph
company
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 C experienced an increase during the whole period of time, in 2000 3
tonnes
 of
waste
 was released, and in 2015 the number reached its highest point of almost 10
tonnes
 produced.
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