You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

the given table illustrates the information about the

number

of

workers

and manufactory in England and Wales between 1851 to 1901. the general overview is that the total of

workers

was the highest all of them in 1851.

By contrast

, in the same year, the

number

of manufactories was the lowest all of them.

Furthermore

, the total of

workers

had the lowest at 61,000 in 1901.

On the contrary

, in the same year, the

number

of manufactories was higher than in other years. In 1901, the

number

of male and female

workers

were almost equal

in

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1901.

Moreover

, the

number

of male

workers

was higher than the

number

of female

workers

in 1851, 1871, 1881, 1891, and 1901.

on the other hand

, in 1861, the

number

of female

workers

was higher than the

number

of

male

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males

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. it is noticeable that the

number

of employees had the highest at 477,100 and there are 225

mamufactories

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manufactories

in 1851. the

number

of male

workers

was the lowest

all

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of them in 1901.

Additionally

, in the same year, the

number

of females was almost equal

as

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to

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male

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males

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.

Furthermore

, the

number

of

famales

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females

female

families

workers

was the highest all of them in